OVERVIEW: Classical haiku poetry of Japan depicts human
beings in their natural contexts, objectifying them along with
the creatures of land, water and sky familiar to pre-industrial
society in that country. Morally, this poetry bears the strong
influence of Buddhism, particularly in its theme of compassion
for the suffering of all things. Conserved by a careful tradition,
haiku poetry teaches brevity and keenness of observation. The
haiku tradition bears strong similarity to certain aspects of
Japanese art and the hand-made book. The seventeen-syllable
haiku form has appealed to American poets and teachers at least
since the 1950's, a fact that suggests its interest has strong
appeal beyond its home culture. Many American haiku poets have
published their work in various books and journals and on the
internet. Among the prominent modern American authors who have
written haiku are Jack Kerouac and Richard Wright. This lesson
sequence will study and compare haiku by the Japanese poets
Basho, Buson, and Issa, and the American author Richard Wright
(1908-1960).
CORE QUESTIONS:
How is it that the classical Japanese haiku has become a model
for poetry written by Americans? What interests link the American
sensibility with this poetry? How have classical Japanese
haiku poets incorporated philosophical themes from Buddhism
into their sensibility? To what extent can Buddhism be understood
as a philosophy or as an attitude in life, rather than as
a religion? Do the themes of haiku poetry represent universals
in human experience? Have American poets who have used the
haiku form imitated the cultural themes of this poetry, or
have they made something new of it?
TIME REQUIRED: Three weeks.
SUGGESTED GRADE LEVELS: Grade 12.
INTERDISCIPLINARY CONNECTIONS: Social studies; art.
For an extension lesson on the creation of Japanese
side-bound books, please click the link.
NEW JERSEY CORE CONTENT STANDARDS: 3.1 D 2 and 3;
G.4, 5, 8 and 13; H 4, 5; 3.2 D 3, 6 and 8.
OBJECTIVES:
<1. Students will read classical haiku to learn their special
sensibility and form.
2. Students will learn about the Buddhist philosophical background
of this poetry, its rootedness in Japanese culture, and the
cultural and social-political history of the era in which
the form was invented.
3. Students will read haiku from selected American poets and
compare with the Japanese tradition and sensibility.
4. Students will learn about the Japanese tradition of hand-made
side-bound books.
5. Students will write original haiku using themes learned
from this study and write these in books hand made in the
Japanese style.
STRATEGIES:
Reading the Japanese Haiku Poets
1. Present selected haiku from the Japanese masters
Basho, Buson, and Issa (in Robert Hass' The Essential Haiku
or other texts) and guide students in recognizing their classical
themes. Read selected poems aloud in the class, a few each
day for the first week, and ask students to tell what they
notice and imagine as they listen. Guide students in paying
special attention to the poems' rustic imagery, their human
situations, their objectivity in expressing emotion, etc.
For each of the poems studied, see how many of the following
themes and technical devices students can recognize with a
minimum of prompting:
·---Seeing the world as suffering
·---Feeling compassion for all things
·---Asceticism
---Mistrust for wordiness and logical explanation
---Sense of transience and contingency in all things
---Interest in wholeness and the unity of all things
---Respect for the ordinary, the small, the despised
---Honoring the ordinary, even the unpleasant commonplace
·---Distancing the ego from things of perception
·---Objectifying emotions as things in nature
·---Sensitivity to nature's rhythms and distinctions
·---Part-for-whole thinking
·---Using the written image as a "snapshot"
to reveal a moment in time
·---Preference for autumn and winter scenery, and for
the rustic
·---Inviting the reader to complete the poem's thought
·---Startling the reader into attention to the world
·---Including in the haiku poem some reference to the
season (called a kigo), whether direct, oblique, or implicit
·---Creating a poetry of temporal-spatial-emotional,
rather than analytical, relations.
This may take some time. Students will have to get familiar
with these themes gradually and learn to recognize them in
the poems. The teacher should demonstrate the kind of interpretation
called for here by reading a few poems aloud and pointing
out their uses of the themes and devices listed here. Invite
students to try interpreting a few more poems on their own,
first as volunteers speaking before the class and then individually,
working out interpretations from the list of themes in their
notebooks. The teacher should intervene where necessary to
help students understand the themes and their roots in Buddhism
and classical Japanese artistic culture. Robert Hass' introduction
will be helpful here. [Students should come to understand,
from their teacher and from readings in Hass or other research
sources, that the classical haiku evolved from a parlor game
of cards; its ascetic philosophical sensibility served as
an antidote to worldliness and gave expression to its first
writers' desire to live somewhat apart from the corruption
of the social-political scene. Parallels might be drawn-later-to
moments in the American experience when writers and others
have expressed a similar mistrust of the public scene.]
2. Now reread a few of the poems studied thus far to
ask students how they should sound. Demonstrate how alterations
of rhythm, speed, emphasis and emotion give different readings
of the poems, suggesting different aspects of their meanings.
Have students work out their own best readings experimentally
by doing this on their own or in small groups and then have
in-class presentations of these.
3. At some point, the teacher should give a brief lecture
or assign reading on Buddhism as a philosophy and as a cultural
influence in Japan, helping students understand the nature
of Buddhist thought as part of the sensibility in these poems.
In addition (and if possible in collaboration with an art
teacher in the school) the teacher should give students some
background understanding of Japanese pictorial art from the
period of haiku poetry's development. Some examples appear
in Robert Hass' anthology, but an art teacher could provide
more. Have students study these pictures for their thematic
content, testing whether some of the haiku themes listed above
are discernible in them. The selectivity, sense of transience
and contingency, sensitivity to nature's rhythms, compassion,
and contextualization of life we hear about in classical haiku
poetry should not be too hard to detect in such pictures.
4. Ask students to write response papers on a few haiku
poems that interest them especially. This should be expressive
writing, in which the students describe their experience with
the haiku, relating their interpreted meanings to other readings,
to personal experiences, to questions they have about life,
etc. These should be shared with other students and the teacher;
questions arising from this writing experience and related
to the nature of haiku or of poetry in general should be discussed
in the class.
5. As students read and interpret the poems from Hass'
anthology, have them collect their favorites in their notebooks,
writing notes on their themes and devices. Each student should
make a personal collection of poems. Allow time for students
to read new poems in class, make original notes on their themes,
and discuss these with their peers. Encourage them to read
the poems aloud, too, listening for nuances of meaning. The
following activities might help. A) Ask students to
imagine the poems as snapshots and speculate on elements of
scene, character, and action that have been deliberately left
out by the poets' descriptions; discuss the canniness of these
descriptions, their expectations that the reader will supply
what is missing. This should reveal the realistic knowledge
of the world that inspires much haiku poetry. Discuss the
cryptic nature of these poems, which this exercise focuses
on, as evidence that the haiku poet mistrusts words (a theme
from Buddhism). B) Students might better appreciate
the brevity of haiku poetry by rewriting several haiku poems
as dialogues between persons embedded in the scene depicted
by the poem. What would each speaker spell out as he or she
observes the scene? What thoughts, reactions, impressions
might people note in conversation that the haiku poet merely
implies in the poem's description? This exercise should make
students more aware of the tacit dimension in haiku poetry.
C) Ask students to collect haiku that work on the principle
of large and small---a common technique in this poetry. Discuss
with them the implications of wholeness this principle brings
into the poems. Explain the Buddhist view of the world as
a wholeness people are usually blind to in their partial attentions
to the myopic business of their lives.
6. Haiku poetry exhibits various themes that might
have a natural interest to American adolescents, including:
separateness and isolation; contemplative gazing; interest
in nature; recognition of incongruity; learning to be critical
and discriminating; sensitivity to emotional aspects of situations;
concern over personal limitations; moodiness; a critique of
hierarchy; etc. As the students read the poems, the teacher
might prompt discussions of these themes where they appear
in the readings. This would provide more interpretive clues
and help build the students' identifications with the poems.
7. A special lesson might be done on ego as a regulatory
concept in this poetry. The Buddhist sensibility underlying
much haiku poetry evinces a constant wariness about ego; haiku
poetry's outward attention to the things of the world, allowing
little personal or self-centered expression, mimics this.
8. Following Hass, we might see that certain haiku
focus deliberately on gross bodily functions and embarrassments.
These follow in a vein of the Japanese classical tradition
known as senryu, vulgar haiku named for a particular master
who devoted himself to this interest. Read a few of these
with students and discuss their bluntness and unprettiness,
getting reactions. These might be compared with lavatory grafitti
or scatological jokes; if they are, key differences should
be noted. The senryu evokes compassion through its emphasis
on embarrassment and the quaintness of bodily comfort. Its
refusal to be decorous makes the senryu particularly challenging
to our sense of taste and politeness, interests that the haiku
sensibility seeks to transcend.
Reading American Haiku
9. After studying the haiku of Basho, Buson and Issa,
the class should now consider how their form might have meaning
in writing poetry about American life. Point out that many
American writers have taken up the haiku form (internet sites
and books available in libraries attest to this). Speculate
with students on reasons for this interest. Ask them to review
the list of haiku themes and discuss which of these might
be especially accessible or appealing to Americans writing
poetry. Perhaps teachers and students could find correspondences
in American literature for the haiku poet's sense of transience,
respect for the ordinary, sensitivity to nature, "snapshot"
writing form, and startling of the attention. But a lesson
on Beat poetry of the 1950's, or on Transcendentalism of the
1850's, would show that American writers have been much taken
with Asian (and particularly Japanese) concepts of the ego
and of wholeness. Here the teacher might introduce some short
pieces by Gary Snyder that show the influence of Japanese
artistic sensibility and regard for nature, though not in
the haiku form. Many other examples would offer themselves.
10. Richard Wright's Haiku: This Other World collects
poems Wright composed during the last 18 months of his life,
with a biographical introduction by his daughter, Julia Wright.
Many of these poems describe country scenes that belong either
to Wright's rural memories of growing up in Mississippi (described
in his autobiography Black Boy) or to his experience living
in the French countryside. (Wright lived in France at the
time he wrote these poems). Help students piece together details
of Wright's biography from his daughter's memoir-introduction
to This Other World, and from other sources they might find
through research, for instance on the internet. Discuss Wright's
story in the class along with a few samples of his haiku.
11. Using ideas from the lessons now already done on
Japanese haiku, the teacher should work with students to interpret
more of Richard Wright's haiku and to consider the question:
Has Richard Wright, an American, written authentic haiku poetry,
and what does your reading of Wright's haiku tell you about
the possibilities of meaningful imitation of this classical
Japanese form by American writers? Work with students now
in collecting in their notebooks and annotating examples of
Richard Wright's haiku, including in their notes references
to Julia Wright's memoir-introduction (or to other available
sources on Wright as a haiku writer). Make sure students have
a sense of how these poems fit into Wright's life and give
expression to his American memories.
Writing Original Haiku
12. Once students have understood something of the
classical sensibility that makes haiku poetry unique, they
should be ready to write some original poems in this form.
The following prompts and suggestions might be helpful in
getting students started in writing their own poems, though
the spirit of imitation itself, working from poems we have
read, might be sufficient to generate some very good poems,
too. Here are some suggestions for getting students started,
or for helping them revise their poems to make them more authentic:
---Think of nature; write about things in nature that have
stirred your compassion.
·---Your haiku images can be from the present or from
memory.
·---Consider writing your images (descriptions) as
sentences first, and then edit them into the three-line haiku
form, cutting words to make them as brief as possible.
·---Make your poem have a kigo, or seasonal term, mimicking
the Japanese use of this device.
·---Write about scenes in which you observe something
very large and something very small at once (the stars and
a barking dog, a car parked near the ocean).
·---You might make the first line of a haiku as a scene,
and the rest about an action happening there.
·---Try making poems in which the second and third
lines serve as comments on the first ("May morning /
so many busy people / neglecting the birds").
·---Try taking a nature image from a birthday card
or calendar and turning this into a haiku.
·---Try turning a snapshot you have at home into a
haiku.
·---Write some images of suffering or embarrassment
you have observed in school as haiku, being sure to add some
note of compassion.
13. Students will probably have questions about syllable-counting
as they write their haiku. Some will have heard before that
the Japanese form allows just five syllables in the first
and last lines and seven in the middle one. Advise them not
to worry about this, on the advice of Robert Hass, whose translations
in The Essential Haiku for the most part are briefer than
17 syllables. If students insist on a justification, tell
them that most syllables in Japanese speech are more curt
than many English syllables; English versions of 17-syllable
haiku will sound longer than Japanese ones, effacing some
of their effect of brevity. For this reason, American haiku
poets have often written poems shorter than 17 syllables (although
Richard Wright stayed with the original number). [Remind students
here that the minimal syllable-count is not the essential
feature of haiku; rather, its special sensibility, indicated
in the themes we are studying here, makes it what it is. Its
special syllable-count and line form express this sensibility
and become part of it.]
14. Introduce the Japanese side-bound book with a demonstration
of how it is made and a talk on the artistic and social standards
it expresses. Emphasize symmetry, balance, the minimal, the
natural (the use of rice papers and natural-fiber string),
the skill of cutting and punching by hand with an awl, etc.
Describe these books as objects remaining close to nature
because of their natural materials. Students might research
one or another of the classical Japanese poets to learn about
their books, how they were made, how their contents were arranged,
how they were published, etc.
15. Have students select their own best haiku poems
and examples from the classical poets of Japan to make into
side-bound hand-made books using materials reminiscent of
Japanese art.
RESOURCES:
Hass, Robert (ed.). The Essential Haiku: Versions from
Basho, Buson, and Issa.
Introduction and verse translations by Robert Hass. Hopewell,
NJ: The Ecco Press, 1994.
Wright, Richard. Haiku: This Other World. Edited and
with notes and afterword by
Yoshinobu Hakatuni and Robert L. Tener. Introduction by Julia
Wright. New York: Arcade Press, 1998.
Keene, Donald. Japanese Literature: An Introduction for
Western Readers. New York:
Grove Press, 1955.
Giroux, Joan. The Haiku Form. Rutland, VT and Tokyo:
Charles E. Tuttle Co., 1974.
ASSESSMENT:
1. Students' original haiku can be assessed for the richness
and complexity of their use of classical Japanese themes and
writing techniques.
2. Students' hand-made side-bound haiku books can be assessed
for their authenticity and richness of meaning.
3. Students can be assigned essays comparing the haiku of
Richard Wright and the classical Japanese haiku poets and
bringing this knowledge to bear on the question: Can American
writers create authentic haiku from their own observation
and experience of the scenery and actions life in the United
States?
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